well, the tittle kinda resemble with AIR ost...
oh, and warning! this project is...uh, girls' romance a.k.a shoujou-ai
. I really need your objective opinion here for the story, since I'm not a good scriptwriter...I hope Novinha-san allows me to post this one here (since I haven't asked his permission here, I'm sorry!) @w@ I get this idea after playing Akaiito/Aoishiro (it's VN in PS2, also shoujo-ai)
let's begin, shall we?
Synopsis
Shiori Tachibana, your typical ordinary girl, moves with her mom to the island called Hanegashima from Kanto. They've been moved for a half year, and Shiori adapted to her new environment pretty fast since the island's people is nice to the outsiders. This story happened in the summer holiday, the first summer Shiori ever had since she lived at Hanegashima. The first and the most unforgettable summer...
She had a dream about someone's voice calling her out, asking her to come, come to this person place. Well, for the first time she ignore it for good, but when it happened for several times and she even saw a mysterious girl in her dream telling her not to go. It's still unknown for Shiori about the voice, the mysterious figure, and the place where she told to go. Until she began to meet with the other women, the time when she know the truth about the island, her family, and herself....
Characters
-Shiori Tachibana-
Age : 15 year old
Height/weight : 155/49
Likes/dislikes : pocky, kotatsu, warm place, animals (especially bird)/ ghost, dark place, spicy and hot food
Shiori and her mother actually already had a house in Hanegashima and they had already lived there for 5 years before (when Shiori was still 5 year old), but after somekind of accident, they moved out from Hanegashima for 10 years and go back again. She forgot all of her childhood memories after that accident. She go to school at Asahi gakuen in the first year. Shiori love to cook and paint. Her mother always praise her for her delicious home-made food. Shiori is a quite timid girl, clumsy, sensitive to other person feeling, care to other people and little bit stubborn. She joined a kendo club for 1 year but left since she isn’t good with sport. Now she joins Art club.
-mysterious girl-
it's still unknown to shiori whether she's a friend or a foe. She wears a white dress and she looks like 9 year-old kid. Shiori met her at the forest when she hear her singing with the birds.
-Shinku Hayashibara-
Age : 29 year old
Height/weight : 170/62
Like/dislike : tepanyaki, coffe, quite place/ fire, shiori’s crying
Exp : Tachibana’s family old aquintance. Shinku is a freelancer photographer who often go abroad. She’s a cool, easy going, mature, and carefull woman. In the first day of the game, Shinku stay over at Tachibana's house, telling them that she will bother them for a while because she had to take some photoghraps for her job.
sory, it's still in the SD-style design -___-;; the 'real' ones are still under development (since I try so many ways in digital linerating...).
-Reika Miyagi-
Age : 15 year old
Height/weight : 156/52
Like/dislike : sweet food, tedy bear, her mother/ oni, her father
Exp : short tempered girl but like cute things, mostly tedy bear. She’s in the same class with Shiori, and act as a class rep. little bit cynical and strict at first, but often get embarrassed when Shiori is kind to her. Reika’s family is rich and well-known because her father is a succesfull businessman who often left her daughter alone at house. Reika dislike her father since he always neglected his family, even when Reika's mother died because of some accident.
Actually there are 10 characters so far, and I hope I can decrease it a little....
setting
-Hanegashima-
the story occur in a present time, almost like the time we live now...
the island where Tachibana family lives. It kinda famous for its rare animal, shirotori (the white bird), and for the natural sceneries. There's only 1 city in Hanegashima, its name is Kanamizawa. Kanamizawa has 3 schools, one of them is Asahi gakuen, where Shiori go. Most of the island's areas still consist of forests, and it's pretty hard to reach. It also has an annual festival called Tori no Matsuri. This festival is to celebrate the day when Shirahime freed the island people from the dreadful evil-god, Fuzaki. People believe that Shirahime turned into a bird, the white bird, after defeating the evil-god to protect the people from evil. That’s why shirotori becomes a sacred animal in the island.
This story will take (maybe) a week before the festival starts.
There're many mistakes (grammar or maybe un-related stories...), so I really beg your help (especially for the story)for this VN m(-___-)m this will handled by me (the CG, programming, etc) since I don't want to bother other busy members, but if you interested to give some advices, crits or anything, I'll be more than happy accept your helping hand XD
main conflict : A certain devil-god lay his eyes on the Hanegashima, can Shiori prevent him to take over the island?
each route conflict :
-mysterious girl-
*can Shiori reveal her true identity and its relationship with shiori's past?
*The relationship between her and shiori
-Shinku-
*Can Shiori chase away Shinku's past trauma and her loneliness?
*her true identity, is she only a freelancer photographer?
-Reika-
*can Shiori make Reika open her heart to the other?
*her hatred toward her father
*the truth behind her mother's death
INTRO
[align=center]“Feather, thousand feathers, dancing beautifully under the blue moon…
Clashing each other, they find their last place to disembark
The origin land…
…Land of The Thousand Feathers.”[/align]
oh, and this is Shiori's sketch design (sorry, it's pretty messy D:) the other characters still under development...
I keep procrastinating a lot...hope i can finish it fast...<___<;;;
the others will post soon~
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you post your story, huh?
I can feel what you feel, Gi-chan! because I do two of them too since I will be the one who responsible for our activity to school 
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